The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this story!!! The descriptions are vivid and beaufiful, and the objects used to describe colors sound perfect--I can feel the color of each one! I volunteer at a nursing home and can think of at least one resident who would really enjoy hearing this story. Thank you for sharing it--it deserves to win!

This is a wonderful story! Very cute, and very meaningful. Thank you for sharing it.
This was a delightful article and something a child would do. Thank you for sharing this story.
Very nice! Brought a little tear to my eyes, too.
This was so heart touching. You have a wonderful way of painting a picture in your story. Thank you for your heart. Keep writing.
I must ditto the above comments, the writing is descriptive and artful, the theme is heartwarming and Winifred is a delightful, sensitive child with a big heart. Great job! I think you've got a winner here!!!
This is just beautiful! You capture the heart and soul of the child AND Mr. Sal so perfectly. This story truly warmed my heart.
"Great minds think alike!" Go over to Intermediate and find another story in which the narrator uses objects to explain color to a blind child. I love this story and the entire concept. Great reading, here!
Lisa! Congrats on placing 2 weeks in a row! Great job. You go girl!