The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
I love this story!!! The descriptions are vivid and beaufiful, and the objects used to describe colors sound perfect--I can feel the color of each one! I volunteer at a nursing home and can think of at least one resident who would really enjoy hearing this story. Thank you for sharing it--it deserves to win!




08/10/06
This is a wonderful story! Very cute, and very meaningful. Thank you for sharing it.
This was a delightful article and something a child would do. Thank you for sharing this story.
08/11/06
Very nice! Brought a little tear to my eyes, too.
08/13/06
This was so heart touching. You have a wonderful way of painting a picture in your story. Thank you for your heart. Keep writing.
08/14/06
I must ditto the above comments, the writing is descriptive and artful, the theme is heartwarming and Winifred is a delightful, sensitive child with a big heart. Great job! I think you've got a winner here!!!
08/16/06
This is just beautiful! You capture the heart and soul of the child AND Mr. Sal so perfectly. This story truly warmed my heart.
08/16/06
"Great minds think alike!" Go over to Intermediate and find another story in which the narrator uses objects to explain color to a blind child. I love this story and the entire concept. Great reading, here!
08/17/06
Lisa! Congrats on placing 2 weeks in a row! Great job. You go girl!