The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice reminder of unreliable is appearance as a window to the soul. The matter-of-factness of God's voice in this piece was refreshing.
I enjoyed this piece very much. Nice work!
Really interesting plot line. I really liked it.
Very good article and well written. It was catchy and topic relevant.
This was very funny ( I laughed out loud at this bit: a long scraggly beard covered with some leftover dried locusts and honey) but also very touching. GOod job.
LOL! Too funny. You've done a great job with your entry and your writing talent is evident. One thing I would watch is your tense - you switched from past to present a few times. But otherwise, excellent work! I enjoyed the read. :-)