The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Wow! Creative! Deep! Awesome writing!
I had to admit, I didn't realize till the end the whale was telling the story! This made it a very interesting read! There were sections where I got a little confused about the people on the ship but I think from a whale's perspective, it made sense!
03/16/05
Yes, very clever twist to this story.
How clever to have the whale tell the story of Jonah and to show that the gods of the seafarers could not save them. Very nicely told.
03/17/05
always loved Jonah's story, because he was still a witness to God even when he was being punished for disobedience. Sometimes I think that is the only way God uses me! ha-ha!
03/18/05
Soooo Good! How long do you think you can keep putting articles in the Beginners section with the talent you have? I officially promote to a higher catagory. Also I surely would love to read anything else you have written. Great!
01/25/06
I really appreciate your reviews. Thanks everyone.