The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Wow! Creative! Deep! Awesome writing!
I had to admit, I didn't realize till the end the whale was telling the story! This made it a very interesting read! There were sections where I got a little confused about the people on the ship but I think from a whale's perspective, it made sense!
03/16/05
Yes, very clever twist to this story.
03/16/05
How clever to have the whale tell the story of Jonah and to show that the gods of the seafarers could not save them. Very nicely told.
03/17/05
always loved Jonah's story, because he was still a witness to God even when he was being punished for disobedience. Sometimes I think that is the only way God uses me! ha-ha!
03/18/05
Soooo Good! How long do you think you can keep putting articles in the Beginners section with the talent you have? I officially promote to a higher catagory. Also I surely would love to read anything else you have written. Great!
01/25/06
I really appreciate your reviews. Thanks everyone.