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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Shrewdness (03/07/05)

TITLE: Bobbing Up and Down
By Tim Liwanag


Two arms bobbing up and down on the rough sea that tempestuous day caught my attention. Whether he submerge to the cold sea bed rapidly or his upper body become paralyze until his air runs out would not matter anymore. I quickly sprinted toward the violent waves to get to him because heaven simply shut its eyes while the wind and tide hurried to clobber the nearly drowning man, a Gath-hepherian.

The terrified mariners nearby on their unmanned ship I will never forget. When the wave of uncertainty was about to wreck their hopes, and just to cheat death, they were willing to part with their goods which they cannot tightly embrace forever. They were crying, shouting and begging their gods to save them. And those ridiculous sailors believed that the frightening tempest was a herald of wrath sent to apprehend somebody aboard their vessel. By some means, they figured out that evil journeyed with them and it was the sleeping Gath-hepherian. Oh those gullible men really feared for their souls!

It was very disturbing. Whatever evil that was upon them, they taught there was a cause for it Ė thatís very alarming indeed! The shipmaster told them to plead for their lives. Yet they opted to cast lots and condemn the sleeper. They were frightened when their deaf gods did nothing to stop the rainstorm. For sure, it was a particularly wearisome day. So they resorted to use a small stone to ascertain divine direction and unswervingly unearth an answer for their troubled fate.

Some time ago heavenly forces watched over them. Maybe they were reminded of the infinite blue sky; but without warning dark clouds snuffed out their sign of hope and their light of day. The wind howled and the downpour unceasingly flooded their ship. Maybe darkness was challenging their faith stance and sense of conscience. What spirit could not observe the hand of God stirring behind an unforeseen predicament? And what tongue could not utter prayer that distressing hour, when the soul, broken by fear of death, was allowed to pour into the open its anguish before God who made the unrelenting vast sea.

Still, they concluded in their muddled minds that the Gath-hepherian was responsible for their despair. That the only way out was for them to carry him and throw him into the open sea.

So they took up Jonah, and cast him forth into the sea: and the sea ceased from her raging.

Then the men feared the Lord exceedingly, and offered a sacrifice unto the Lord, and made vows.

Now the Lord had prepared me to swallow up Jonah. And Jonah was in my belly three days and three nights.

And Iím waiting for the Lord to speak unto me, so I may spit out the Gath-hepherian upon the dry land.

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Crista Darr03/14/05
Wow! Creative! Deep! Awesome writing!
donna robinson03/15/05
I had to admit, I didn't realize till the end the whale was telling the story! This made it a very interesting read! There were sections where I got a little confused about the people on the ship but I think from a whale's perspective, it made sense!
Sally Hanan03/16/05
Yes, very clever twist to this story.
Phyllis Inniss 03/16/05
How clever to have the whale tell the story of Jonah and to show that the gods of the seafarers could not save them. Very nicely told.
L.M. Lee03/17/05
always loved Jonah's story, because he was still a witness to God even when he was being punished for disobedience. Sometimes I think that is the only way God uses me! ha-ha!
Delores Baber03/18/05
Soooo Good! How long do you think you can keep putting articles in the Beginners section with the talent you have? I officially promote to a higher catagory. Also I surely would love to read anything else you have written. Great!
Tim Liwanag01/25/06
I really appreciate your reviews. Thanks everyone.