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Previous Challenge Entry (EDITOR'S CHOICE)
Topic: Like a Fish Out of Water (10/24/13)

TITLE: One of One Hundred Fifty Three
By Bonnie Rose Hudson
~9th Place


Psst. Come here. Have a seat beside me on the shore. I know sitting and talking to a fish probably wasnít what you had in mind when you decided to stroll along the Sea of Galilee this morning, but Iíve got something important to say and not long to share it.

Do you see those eight men sitting a couple of yards away? The big oneís name is Peter. He and I have spent a lot of time together in these waters. Those are his friends beside himóThomas, John, and some others. But itís the one in the middle I want you to take a good look at. His name is Jesus, and heís the reason Iím here on the sand in this pile of fish. I used to think I belonged in the water, but I discovered I was wrong.

Now hold onóI know what youíre going to say. Iím crazy, thinking I belong anywhere but in the water. I am a fish after all, and everyone knows that fish canít live for long if they donít have water. But let me explain.

It all started about three years ago. I was swimming along, taunting Peter. Heíd been trying to catch me all night, but I had evaded him. He was tired, and I was feeling rather pleased with myself. There was a crowd of people on the shore, and I was curious, so I followed him in when he went to wash his net. Jesus was teaching, and the people were crowding. He got into Peterís boat and sat down to teach from there.

I had never heard such beautiful words. He talked about the kingdom of God and about being a part of it. He talked about a new way to live that seemed backward from what everyone was used to. He talked about a God who cared and knew everything there was to knowóeven about tiny sparrows.

When he was finished, he told Peter to put out into the deep water and let down his nets for a catch. Peter said, ďMaster, weíve worked hard all night and havenít caught anything. But because you say so, I will let down the nets.Ē

The boat headed for the deep water. Thatís when I heard his voice. It was Jesus again, but this time, he was talking to me! All he said was, ďCome.Ē And I came. I swam with all my might out into the deep water.

The next thing I knew, I was caught in Peterís net with hundreds of others. I started to panic. I knew Jesus had called me to this spot, but suddenly, I didnít want to be here. I looked around for a way out. The net began to tear; I found a hole and swam through it. I was free! But I was alone.

Iíve never regretted anything more than I have regretted turning back when I knew Jesus had called me to come. I waited for three years, watching for Peter and Jesus to return to fish, but I didnít hear his call again. One time I saw Jesus actually walking on the water! I realized then what Peter and his friends were beginning to understandóJesus was no ordinary man. He was the Lord of all creation. Thatís why I had felt so alone since turning away; I had not stayed where the Lord had created me to be. He had a purpose for me that day in the boat, but I had turned away. I thought I would never get another chance to be with him.

Until last night. I was surprised to see Peter and his friends fishing. Jesus wasnít with them, so I stayed out of sight. Early this morning, I heard the call again. ďCome.Ē It was the Lord! And I came. I swam right for Peter, and he and his friends hauled me and one hundred and fifty two of my friends and neighbors to the shore.

Thatís when I saw him. I donít know why he has called me here, to this shore at this moment. Itís not where I thought I belonged. But itís like Peter said, ďBecause you say so, I will.Ē The Lord knows more than I do, and even if it doesnít make sense right now, Iíll gladly be a fish out of water as long as Iím with the Lord.

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C D Swanson 11/04/13
Simply loved it! Great story! Thank you.

God bless~
Yvonne Blake 11/05/13
Wonderfully written!
I like your POV and how you connected the various stories from the Sea of Galilee.
I especially like this line -
"Iíve never regretted anything more than I have regretted turning back when I knew Jesus had called me to come."
This sums up the whole thing. Well done!
C D Swanson 11/07/13
Congratulations! God Bless~
Bea Edwards 11/12/13
Lovely story from a unique perspective. Yet still one that is relevant-how much we miss out on if we don't come when called.
Great concept and congratulations!