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Previous Challenge Entry (EDITOR'S CHOICE)
Topic: Expand (07/18/13)

TITLE: Awareness
By Yvonne Blake
07/24/13
~3rd Place


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“Thou hast covered me in my mother’s womb.”
Comfort
Beating heart
Enveloped in love

“To everything there is a season . . . a time to be born”
Brightness
Babbling noise
Enveloped in hope

”Tender and beloved in the sight of my mother.”
Safety
Loving home
Enveloped in care

“Doth not He see my ways and count all my steps?”
Explore
Neighborhood
Enveloped in friends

“Lead me in Thy truth, and teach me.”
Learning
Growing mind
Enveloped in rules

“Thou art acquainted with all my ways.”
Venture
Winding Roads
Enveloped in self

“The LORD is high above all nations.”
Travel
Other lands
Enveloped in man

“I have been young, and now am old.”
Tired
Aching bones
Enveloped in time

“If I ascend up into heaven, Thou art there.”
Beyond
Endless stars
Enveloped in awe

“O worship the LORD in the beauty of holiness.”
Holy
Eternal
Enveloped in God

“Thine, O LORD is the greatness, and the power,
and the glory, and the victory, and the majesty;
for all that is in the heaven and in the earth is Thine.”


II Chronicles 29:11
Job 31:4
Psalm 37:25
Psalm 96:9
Psalm 113:4
Psalm 139:8,13
Proverbs 4:3
Ecclesiastes 3:2

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Linda Goergen07/25/13
I absolutely love this poem of “expanding awareness”!! So of course you have the perfect title! You have managed to say so much; give so much vision and evoke so much thought; in so few words it is amazing! I particularly like our awareness in Heaven summoned up as “Enveloped in Awe” & “Enveloped in God” — such enormous comfort and contemplation wrapped up in those short phrases! Just an AWESOME job on this!
Carolyn Ancell07/25/13
A piece that expands right before the reader's eyes, and swells in the reader's heart. Great job.
Dannie Hawley 07/27/13
Your beautifully penned work makes my heart sing. Who can help but continue worshipping Him well after the piece has finished.
lynn gipson 07/27/13
I love the idea of being "enveloped" in faith. and this is so beautifully written I had to read it several times. The words describe such wonder at life and the beauty of knowing God.

Blessings, Lynn
Judith Gayle Smith07/28/13
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
Judith Gayle Smith07/28/13
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
Judith Gayle Smith07/28/13
Beautiful. I love the style almost as much as I love what you packed into these wondrously encompassing envelopes!

Love to you In and through and because of His love,

Judi
Bea Edwards 07/30/13
Ohhh absolutely lovely and breathtaking!
lynn gipson 08/01/13
Congratulations on your 3rd placing in the Master level! Very excellent writing, my friend.!
Linda Goergen08/01/13
CONGRATULATIONS YVONNE! I just knew this was a winner.
CD Swanson 08/01/13
Congrats Yvonne! God bless~
Colin Swann08/01/13
Congrats on your 3rd place.
Leola Ogle 08/01/13
Congratulations, Yvonne, on placing second for this well-deserved entry. God bless!
Danielle King 08/01/13
Creative and simply beautiful to read. Loved it. Congratulations.
Bea Edwards 08/01/13
Yay for you!
Noel Mitaxa 08/01/13
This entry keeps on growing, and takes us with it. Well done on your third placing.
Genia Gilbert08/01/13
Congratulations on your EC! Well deserved for great writing.
Beth LaBuff 08/14/13
Gorgeous work, Vonnie. Love the progression of this and your wonderful message. Congrats on your EC!