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TITLE: What She Sees
By Lucas Fyeld
01/16/09
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Written near Seattle three or four years ago. I knew very little about that woman. It was before I met and was married ... to this incredible woman who KNOWS and still "sees." Even more .... Amazing.
What she sees

When I look in the mirror,
Or better …
When I look out my glass balcony door
Into the yard late at night when there
Is no light ... out.

When that happens I see an image of myself.

It’s what she sees when she sees me.
When I look…
I see the pain that I have caused
The hearts I’ve broken
The mistakes I’ve made
The cars I’ve wrecked
The things I’ve stolen
The lives…
That I have taken

That’s not what she sees.

She smiled when I said goodbye at church, Sunday.
I think “Why does she smile at me like that?
Doesn’t she know all of my sins?”

No.
She doesn’t.

And here’s the best part:
Neither does God.
God sees me as blameless
Because of the love of Jesus Christ.
All I have to do is ask.

Amazing Grace.
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