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TITLE: A POETíS CRY FOR HELP
By Femi Onabanjo
01/09/09
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Honest critiquing would be appreciated. (Any thoughts on the ending?)
Often I feel dry
And donít want to write
Not that I couldnít try
Just that it mightnít come out right

I know youíve been there
I see you nodding in agreement
Perhaps I need some help
Thatís just why these lines were penned

See, the problem is a poemís not a poem
If the words donít Ďwalkí in tandem
Youíll notice that Iíve worked in some rhyme and rhythm
To ensure that the flow has no schism

I know itís not good enough reason
To not write both in and out of season
Though you may want to charge me for ĎPoetic Treasoní
You surely wonít throw a harmless poet in prison

Iíve got the goods and I know it
I need only to show it
If you will just help me grow it
I can prove I was born to do it

Have I got your word?
That youíll help me sharpen my sword
And keep me pressing forward
Till the glory of my pen is restored.
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