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TITLE: Computer and Our Lives
By Verna Mull
12/12/08
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I had trouble with the 4th. line of the first stanza. Any suggestions?
Our lives are like a computer,
As we gather data every day.
We draw up many programs,
Of our work, and of our play.

We have to push the start button
To get ourselves in gear!
Again, we push the start button
To shut down, day end is near.

If we follow the wrong path,
Nothing will go our way;
But if we follow Jesus’ path,
He’ll be our hope and stay.

The data that we store away,
That in God’s Word we find;
Will guard our weary pathway,
And give us peace of mind!

Then, when our own computer
Shuts down for the very last;
We’ll enjoy life with Jesus,
Forgiven of our past!
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