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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This was in the weekly challenge but I would like some critiques. Really seasonal.
There are many gifts of Christmas,
Filling multiple hearts with joy;
But the gift that fills hearts with love,
Is Jesus, Godís own Baby Boy!
Many of the gifts of Christmas
Bring only a momentary pleasure;
The excitement has soon ebbed away,
Godís Gift is a Gift beyond measure!
All homes canít afford the tinsel and lights,
The trees, the baubles, and glitter;
But Jesus came to bear manís sin,
Keep hearts from becoming bitter!
Jesus puts a smile on the face,
Springs of joy in the stride.
Heíll comfort, guide, and keep you,
Walk daily close to your side!
Heíll lift your heavy burdens,
Provide for your every need.
Heíll fill hearts with peace and joy,
Re-pay for every good deed!
No matter what your circumstance,
His love is always there,
Thereís comfort in His presence,
He will answer every prayer!
So, as you place your presents,
Carefully beneath your tree,
Make room for Jesus in your heart;
Thatís the happiest youíll ever be!
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