It's easy to critique the works of others and get your work critiqued. Just follow the steps below:
1) Post your first piece.
2) You must then critique the work of another member to post another piece yourself.
3) For each critique you give, you earn 1 credit that can be used to post another one of your writings.
4) You can build up credits to be used at another time by giving critiques to others.
Our Daily Devotional
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.
TRUST JESUS TODAY
When grief becomes too hard to bear.
Becky, More Bounce for the Ounce
Becky, More Bounce for the Ounce,
‘I shaved my legs today.’
but I know
it was a defining moment.
I know about defining moments.
Looking back, that was it,
that was the moment when…
When you shaved your legs?
Yeah, laugh if you like.
You mean Becky More Bounce for the Ounce, Becky?
Yeah, that one.
This was no act of beautification
This was affirmation
Spirit tentatively turning out
‘Grief is unpredictable and best given into.’
‘Don’t fight it.
Go with it now or, when it comes,
as it most definitely will,
it will come crashing.
My friend Becky…
Yeah, More Bounce for the Ounce Becky,
she embraced it
vomited out the ugliness
vomited it all over us
we who love her
because we love her.
from Becky, before it’s too late,
from a friend of a friend,
while you can.
I ignored grief
it did not ignore me.
curled sensuously around my being
tender tendrils of creeper
firming to an
Grafting grief to being
being to grief
Bearing winter blooms
who thought I was wise,
found myself seduced by a sharper blade.
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
REMEMBER, this is a Critique Circle. Please try to give a critique to receive a critique. If you do not want to give any critiques, you can use the REGULAR ARTICLE SUBMISSION area. If you are unsure about how to critique, please use the CRITIQUE GUIDELINES and CRITIQUE TIPS.
To view your critiques that you receive on any writing, login to your account and click "CRITIQUE CIRCLE MANAGEMENT" to view all of your critiques and edit each piece. Then, click "VIEW CRITIQUES" next to the article title to view critiques on that piece. Comments on all of your writings when using the Critique Circle will not be displayed publicly as regular and writing challenge articles. They can only be viewed by accessing them from your account.