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TRUST JESUS TODAY
Even When Hurt…We Must Forgive and Forget
Forget his name, forget the face
Forget his kiss and warm embrace
Forget the love you thought you once knew
Remember you’re smart and will find someone new
Forget how often you sat and waited for him to phone
Forget how often you waited and sat alone
Forget that was the time when he was your dream world
Remember it was he who chose another girl
Forget the hours you two sat and talked
Forget all of his little traits and how he walked
Forget the nice things you two did almost every day
Remember the cold fact that he chose to walk away
Forget how often he said he really cared
Forget the fun times you two shared
Forget those good times and how close your two were
Remember the cold fact that he left you and choose her
Forget how often he said your days together would always last
Forget him and accept that those hours and words have now passed
Forget his sweet, gentle and teasing ways
Remember that you’re smart as you plan for future beautiful days
Forget the fast heart beats when he walked by
Forget the many times he made you cry
Forget your thrill when he spoke your name
Remember your future will be fantastice without bering the same
Forget the things you two used to do
Forget the many times he said he loved only you
Forget the many times he said he would leave you never
Remember that it was he who choose to go for ever
Forget how he so often held your hand
Forget all of his sweet nesses if you can
Forget also the many times you were a fool
Remember always that it wasn’t you, but he…that broke the rule
© GENE HUDGENS
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