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TITLE: Today I Saw the Son
By Leticia Caroccio
04/14/05
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This is my first try at poetry. This one came as a result of a wonderful experience I had one dark day in my life last spring. I would love to get opinions.
Today I Saw the Son
By: Leticia Caroccio

Today I saw the sun
As if for the first time
Shinning through the darkness of the skies
Through the rain
Through the lightening
Shattering through the thunder

Today I saw the sun
Brilliant and powerful
Lovely and warm
Shinning for me
To brighten my cloudy day

Today I saw the Son
For the very first time

He shined into the darkest
Deepest part of my heart
Through the tears
Through the pain
Piercing through my heartache

Today I saw the Son
Rejoicing
With shouts of glory
Exquisite and bright
Casting His holy glow
Ordaining my every step

Today I saw the Son
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