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I'm wanting to compare breathing with breaching... but don't know if this is working... am I using enough words... is the comparison obvious???
Coming up for air is different.
A fluid upward motion,
surfacing as lungs draw life.
Above the waterline
sunlight visits ancient skin,
then momentum takes you
to green glow silence.
(as compared to) or (yet)
within you is a rising,
a welling up,
willing every sinew, every fibre
to breach bounds
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