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TITLE: A Child's Not the Same
By Dixie Phillips
04/10/05
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A child’s not the same when the daddy says goodbye.
The children are so sad and the mamas always cry.
A child’s not the same when the mama walks away.
They hurt so deep inside and dream of yesterday.

A home is not the same when it’s been torn apart.
All that’s ever left is someone’s broken heart.
A home is not the same when they say their love is gone.
Deep inside their heart, they know that it is wrong.

Don’t leave your family for a moment of pleasure.
Those lives God has given you are a priceless treasure.
God will give you the strength you need.
He will help you through, you’ll see.
If you want a happy family, God is the key!

You ask me how I know this song I sing is true.
My daddy said, “Goodbye!” and my heart broke in two.
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