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TITLE: I Love You Better
By Lori Othouse
07/10/08
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This is intended to be a picture book for very young children, ages approx. 2-5. I would greatly appreciate any feedback on appropriateness, length, rhythm/rhyme, etc. Thank you!!
How much do you love me, Mommy? asked Andie.

As much as a piece of chocolate candy?



Do you love me as much as Banjo, our cat?

Or as much as your favorite Sunday hat?



Why, I love you better than any of those!

Said Mom back to Andie, right down to your toes!



I love you better than tickles on tummies,

Better than whiskers or pink noses on bunnies.



I love you better than ice cream or cake,

Better than brownies or the cookies we bake.



I love you better than the secrets I keep,

Much better than sweet dreams while Im asleep.



I love you better than fireflies in jars,

I love you better than the moon and the stars.



I love you better than sweet puppy kisses,

Much better than all of my birthday wishes.



I love you better than bedtime goodnights,

Better than morning hugs in the sunlight.



I love you much better than all the rest,

I love you betterI love you best!
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