Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Join Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Get Our Daily Devotional             Win A Publishing Package             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
THE CRITIQUE CIRCLE

BACK TO
CRITIQUE CIRCLE

INSTRUCTIONS
COMPLETE
INSTRUCTIONS HERE

CRITIQUE GUIDELINES

CRITIQUE TIPS

HELP TOUR

It's easy to critique the works of others and get your work critiqued. Just follow the steps below:

1) Post your first piece.

2) You must then critique the work of another member to post another piece yourself.

3) For each critique you give, you earn 1 credit that can be used to post another one of your writings.

4) You can build up credits to be used at another time by giving critiques to others.
Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST





TITLE: Sara's Summer of Truth
By Celeste Ammirata
07/04/08
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND

I am working on a story about Sara, a shy, seventeen year old girl who has a strong faith in God. And about the people and situations He allows in her life to draw her closer to Him. The target audience is women, aged late teens and up.
I'm interested in knowing if this short prologue peeks your interest in Sara and her story.
Thank you.
Sara sat in the car, idling in the parking lot of Steinbeck High School. Staring out at, though not clearly seeing, the excited, anxious faces of her peers; she wondered. What hopes did they hold for the nineteen seventy eight/seventy nine school year? What secret dreams propelled them? What friends would they make? Or lose? How dramatically would their lives change during the next nine months?
Had it been only two and a half months since she last saw this building? It seemed like a lifetime. She thought back, trying to remember the exact moment when the familiar path she had been walking veered drastically to start her on the journey she was now traveling.
She smiled, remembering the day Mike Mulligan first smiled at her. It had seemed innocent enough. Nothing life altering…………..
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
YOUR CREDITS

LOGIN HERE




REMINDER:

REMEMBER, this is a Critique Circle. Please try to give a critique to receive a critique. If you do not want to give any critiques, you can use the REGULAR ARTICLE SUBMISSION area. If you are unsure about how to critique, please use the CRITIQUE GUIDELINES and CRITIQUE TIPS.

VIEWING CRITIQUES:

To view your critiques that you receive on any writing, login to your account and click "CRITIQUE CIRCLE MANAGEMENT" to view all of your critiques and edit each piece. Then, click "VIEW CRITIQUES" next to the article title to view critiques on that piece. Comments on all of your writings when using the Critique Circle will not be displayed publicly as regular and writing challenge articles. They can only be viewed by accessing them from your account.