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TITLE: In the shortness of time
By Dwayne Collins
06/10/08
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Making people aware that time is being shortened and the changes we make are crucial to the time we have left.
In the shortness of time…

Most of you have noticed that time is becoming short, as we can see that the sun goes down and the day has ended the week. As the week ends the month changes to the next and soon we will have another president. When Obama takes his seat in the white house we will have recognized that another four years has passed and soon we will be on the edge of another cycle of time.

In all of this what do we learn? Most of us are learning just what was meant of our education and the others are gathering the knowledge needed to pass on to the next generation. When we learn from education we pass on a hatred that has been handed down by the haters of mankind and there is no knowledge that should be passed on but the educators job is to give it to every on of the children of our futures. This is why there is so much doubt when a good person is being brought up to the front of the class and we want to see that person punished just for being righteous.

We are being guided by those who create the misfortunes of mankind and then lay back and watch the destruction it causes. This is where those who are obtaining knowledge observe the evil caused by these demonic carriers of mental viruses and relay this knowledge to the children of tomorrow. Some of us have to be able to hold down righteous intelligence and others will continue to be the carriers of hatred, which will destroy itself and eventually mankind.

Now I have seen many things since I’ve been writing TRUTHS and I have heard the minds of scholars as they pretend to know that nothing is happening. But it is not them who will be holding back the time in our lives. It is you who will be accountable for the knowledge attained at the end of each day. It is you who will know that in November when Change is presented with Extinction who will be the leader of the coming of the last day of breath. It will be you who will keep your opinions mixed up with the ideas of evil men whose flesh cover up demons and dragons.

Our children are the bearers of our knowledge or education. Wisdom comes from knowledge and lies come from education. We must be the passers of WISDOM and our children can grow up to be leaders in a world of changes. In passing on WISDOM our children will be carriers of LOVE and this will bring on LIFE not continued wars brought to us from lying educators. In passing on WISDOM our children can enjoy the technology that is in the future of mankind.

Because time is short there is something we all will know from the coming of the end of breath and that is at one time we had the opportunity to give our children the best. At one time we could have given up the strength of the nations just by allowing TRUTH to come into a world smothered by lies and hatred. At one time we could have made a decision that would have ended all wars, even the war that caused spirits to battle. All we need to do was allow the REAL TRUTH to come out of the mouths of the people.

Now as was said the days will make short the months and the years will soon pass by like weeks. Everything will cause our time to be shortened and what will be passed on to your children? Gather your thoughts and make good all the knowledge you allow your mind to hold. Those who choose to be educated listen to the words spoken and see if your WISDOM grows from the letters put together to deceive you and make you turn against your fellowman.

We must always remember that we all make up mankind. We are a HUMAN RACE and we were never monkeys nor fish. We were created from ONE who speaks and there is existence. One woman and One man created generations. We fight because we allow the hater of mankind to educate us and then we educate our children from the words of these unrighteous figmentations.

In order for us to pass on TRUE LOVE and this is what we all seek; we must begin to gather knowledge from all that we see from the life we are living today. We must take out the wickedness of our unfortunate brothers and sisters who fall prey to demonic pressures. We must eliminate the evil deeds committed by our brothers and sisters who have been educated by those who only hate the futures of what can be mankind and we can be an environment of LOVE and HAPPINESS.

There are so many of us who know that the lies are lies and there is no TRUTH in any of them. And now change is coming and we will have to decide whether or not we will be a part of this change. Some of us will and the others… Well let’s say that in the shortness of time all things will come to an end.
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