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TITLE: Tell Me, Traveler, Where Do You Come From And Whither Are You Bound?
By Lauren Dahl
05/14/08
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I come from the Garden of Eden, sir,
So beautiful, so rare!
But I lost her, Eden, sir,
And all the goodness there.

Then I wandered in the desert, sir,
Stark and burning bare,
I nearly perished in the desert, sir,
In the devilís own cruel lair.

I came upon a cross then, sir
Bloody, yet somehow rare,
Holiness was murdered, sir,
And hung in pain up there.

I cast down my guilt and sin, sir,
Accepted mercy not my share,
I am bound for heaven, sir,
A world of freedom without care.
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