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TITLE: Adventure,s of Ron Huckelberry...#22 Younger sis nearly has a heart attack
By gene hudgens
04/08/08
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Adventures of Ron Huckelberry...#22 Younger sis nearly has a heart attack


When Ronís family moved into the house in the new subdivision they knew there were mice and rats in the neighborhood and in the house.

In the hall way was located a small door where water meters etc are located. This area was not self contained and a rat could come from outside, into the house walls and actually enter the house through little door.

Dad was planning to correct this problem, but never got around to it.

One night very late Ronís sister went to the toilet. When she sat on the toilet something cold, wet, and smooth rubbed her bottom. She screamed and Mom and I rushed to see what was wrong.

To this day we have no idea how Sandy accomplished the feat, but she was sitting on the window sill of a small bath room window, quite high on the wall. She was screaming, but could not say a word. She only pointed at the toilet.

When Mom and looked into the toilet we saw a huge water soaked rat fighting to get out of the toilet. It had apparently tried to get water to drink and fell into the toilet. Its water soaked body was then too heavy to get out of the slick toilet. When Sandy sat down, it accidentally touched her bottom.

Ronís mom rushed to get Ronís ball bat and then began to beat the rat to death. In the process she broke the toilet bowl, and the toilet couldnít be used until a new bowl was installed.
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