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TITLE: Break the Silence
By Amber Riebe
04/07/08
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Let me know your thoughts, please!
This silence between us is so loud.
Feel like I’m going deaf
from not hearing a sound.
I’m trying to get up
oh but something…something’s holding me down!
Wish I’d go blind to the distractions of life.
Wish it wasn’t so hard
just to keep You in my sight.

I want to hear You whisper in my ear tonight.
I need to feel Your arms around me,
Lord, hold me tight!
Tell me again how You love me so.
Tell me, Lord, how You’ll never let me go.
Drawn to You since the day I was born,
in this cold world I seek Your love.
I need Your love to keep me warm.

The silence between us is so loud.
Must be deaf ‘cause I can’t hear a sound.
Must be blind ‘cause I can’t see Your light.
If this goes on much longer I won’t survive!
Without You here the world is desolate and bare.
Feel like I can’t even breathe
‘cause something heavy’s hangin’ in the air.

I want to hear You whisper in my ear tonight.
I need to feel Your arms around me,
Lord, hold me tight!
Tell me again how You love me so.
Tell me, Lord, how You’ll never let me go.
Drawn to You since the day I was born,
in this cold world I seek Your love.
I need Your love to keep me warm.

Lord, here I am, needing to be filled again.
You’re the only One who can heal me within.
You’re the only One who can break the silence.
How am I to go on living like this?
Shatter this silence into a million pieces!
Open my eyes to see the light of Jesus!
Lord let me hear Your voice and see Your light…


I want to hear You whisper in my ear tonight.
I need to feel Your arms around me,
Lord, hold me tight!
Tell me again how You love me so.
Tell me, Lord, how You’ll never let me go.
Drawn to You since the day I was born,
in this cold world I seek Your love.
I need Your love to keep me warm.

My Lord, whisper in my ear tonight.
Wrap Your arms around me
and hold me so tight!
Tell me how You love me so!
Please Lord, tell me You'll never let go!
I've needed You since the day I was born,
in this world only Your love
Lord, I need Your love to keep me warm.
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