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TRUST JESUS TODAY
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Hey there! Hope you enjoy this. My main question with my lyrics is usually, can you picture this working as a song? This is written from the perspective of Jesus. All comments are welcome.
There’s a space between
you and Me.
It’s pushing us apart;
don’t wanna loose your heart!
If you will come to Me
I promise you will see
There’s common ground
where only My love is found.
Just keep your eyes on Me
so you don’t fall into
the space between.
I say, seek and you will find!
Don’t stand at the edge
like it’s the end of the line!
Don’t you know I gave all I had?
I gave Myself to bridge the gap,
laid a blood-stained cross over this divide
and I’m here to lead you to the other side.
I’m the bridge so you don’t need
to fall into this space between.
Now you’re so close
but still so far.
Can’t say how much
it breaks My heart!
I want to do so much more!
But the choice is yours.
I won’t force you to accept Me.
Oh how it breaks Me to see
you're slipping into the space between!
I watch you with tears in My eyes
as you continue to struggle and try…
I say, seek and you will find!
Don’t stand at the edge
like it’s the end of the line!
Don’t you know I gave all I had?
I gave Myself to bridge the gap,
laid a blood-stained cross over this divide
and I’m here to lead you to the other side.
I’m the bridge so you don’t need
to fall into this space between.
I stand here and watch
as you struggle on your own.
When will you admit,
you can’t do this alone?
You try to take the long way around.
You’re so close to the edge
and it’s a long way down!
You go through needless pain.
All this time you’ve struggled in vain.
My child, it’s a long way down
and I tell the truth…
Only in Me, can the way be found!
I say, seek and you will find!
Don’t stand at the edge
like it’s the end of the line!
Don’t you know I gave all I had?
I gave Myself to bridge the gap,
laid a blood-stained cross over this divide
and I’m here to lead you to the other side.
I’m the bridge so you don’t need
to fall into this space between.
I gave to you all I had,
gave My life to fill the gap.
So reach out and take My hand
I’m the bridge you need
to cross over this space between!
Seek and you will find
It’s not the end of the line.
I’m the only bridge you need
to cross over the space between.
I’m the bridge who will bring
you across the space between.
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