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TITLE: Half Way
By Amber Riebe
04/04/08
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Hey everyone! Thanks for taking the time to read this. I'd appreciate any and all comments on this piece as well as any opinions on how you believe these lyrics would fit with music.
Donít know if I wanna stand up
or if I should just sit downÖ.
Donít know if I wanna keep quiet
or if I should shout out loud!

Your Book says I shouldnít be this way.
Says if I am in the end theyíll be hell to pay!
God, I donít wanna go that route!
Donít wanna be half way in and a-half way out!
I donít wanna be in the middle, man!
So God, wonít You just grab my hand?
Grab me and pull me just as hard as You can!

Seems Iím always half way in and a-half way out!
Canít seem to make up my mind about
what it is I wanna doÖ
should I build on my past or start bran new?
So Iím always half way in and a-half way out!
Never can make up my mind aboutÖ
I donít know why this is what I do!
I donít know why I donít just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Canít be half way in Ďcause then Iím half way out!
Canít half believe Ďcause it leaves room for doubt!

Seems Iím always half way in and a-half way out.
Seems Iím always full of doubt.
I donít know why this is what I do.
I donít know why I donít just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!

So Iím gonna stop doing this thing I do.
Iím not giving half, no, uh-uh,
Iím gonna give it ALL to You!
Iím gonna give all of myself for You to use.
God, take me and use me as You choose!
Wanna give You all I have!
Donít wanna keep holding back!

Seems Iím always half way in and a-half way out!
Canít seem to make up my mind about
what it is I wanna doÖ
should I build on my past or start bran new?
So Iím always half way in and a-half way out!
Never can make up my mind aboutÖ
I donít know why this is what I do!
I donít know why I donít just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Canít be half way in Ďcause then Iím half way out!
Canít half believe Ďcause it leaves room for doubt!

So God, wonít You just grab my hand?
Grab me and pull me just as hard as You can!
Pull my spirit all the way into You!
Take all thatís old in me and make it new!

So Iím not always half way in and a-half way out!
Now help me make up my mind aboutÖ
What it is I have to do!
I know I need to GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Canít be half way in Ďcause then Iím half way out!
Canít half believe Ďcause it leaves room for doubt!
So now Iím making up my mind aboutÖ

Iím jumping in even though Youíre over my head!
Iím jumping in!
Gonna see if I sink or swim!
No more will I be half way in and a-half way out!
Now Iíve made up my mind about
what it is Iím gonna do.
Iím gonna start this life bran new!
Gonna get on top of my chair and stand for You!
Gonna shout about what only You can do!
Gonna use this life to spread YOUR TRUTH!

Not gonna be half way in and a-half way out!
Now Iím gonna scream and shout about
what it is I choose to do
Now Iím just gonna GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
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