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Hey everyone! Thanks for taking the time to read this. I'd appreciate any and all comments on this piece as well as any opinions on how you believe these lyrics would fit with music.
Don’t know if I wanna stand up
or if I should just sit down….
Don’t know if I wanna keep quiet
or if I should shout out loud!
Your Book says I shouldn’t be this way.
Says if I am in the end they’ll be hell to pay!
God, I don’t wanna go that route!
Don’t wanna be half way in and a-half way out!
I don’t wanna be in the middle, man!
So God, won’t You just grab my hand?
Grab me and pull me just as hard as You can!
Seems I’m always half way in and a-half way out!
Can’t seem to make up my mind about
what it is I wanna do…
should I build on my past or start bran new?
So I’m always half way in and a-half way out!
Never can make up my mind about…
I don’t know why this is what I do!
I don’t know why I don’t just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Can’t be half way in ‘cause then I’m half way out!
Can’t half believe ‘cause it leaves room for doubt!
Seems I’m always half way in and a-half way out.
Seems I’m always full of doubt.
I don’t know why this is what I do.
I don’t know why I don’t just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
So I’m gonna stop doing this thing I do.
I’m not giving half, no, uh-uh,
I’m gonna give it ALL to You!
I’m gonna give all of myself for You to use.
God, take me and use me as You choose!
Wanna give You all I have!
Don’t wanna keep holding back!
Seems I’m always half way in and a-half way out!
Can’t seem to make up my mind about
what it is I wanna do…
should I build on my past or start bran new?
So I’m always half way in and a-half way out!
Never can make up my mind about…
I don’t know why this is what I do!
I don’t know why I don’t just GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Can’t be half way in ‘cause then I’m half way out!
Can’t half believe ‘cause it leaves room for doubt!
So God, won’t You just grab my hand?
Grab me and pull me just as hard as You can!
Pull my spirit all the way into You!
Take all that’s old in me and make it new!
So I’m not always half way in and a-half way out!
Now help me make up my mind about…
What it is I have to do!
I know I need to GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
Can’t be half way in ‘cause then I’m half way out!
Can’t half believe ‘cause it leaves room for doubt!
So now I’m making up my mind about…
I’m jumping in even though You’re over my head!
I’m jumping in!
Gonna see if I sink or swim!
No more will I be half way in and a-half way out!
Now I’ve made up my mind about
what it is I’m gonna do.
I’m gonna start this life bran new!
Gonna get on top of my chair and stand for You!
Gonna shout about what only You can do!
Gonna use this life to spread YOUR TRUTH!
Not gonna be half way in and a-half way out!
Now I’m gonna scream and shout about
what it is I choose to do
Now I’m just gonna GIVE IT ALL TO YOU!
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