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TITLE: ...Hidden, in Him, in HIM! (A Covenant)
By wallacetrust watosen
03/19/08
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Back ground to this peice is the theory that God has through diverse means tried to bind man by deed; all of which proved abortive till he swore by himself.

Go through and give me the best of your analysis.
My life is nothing less secured under this new testament
Based on blood; on life and not articles that’re impermanent

Noah Lamech had a covenant evidenced by rainbow
But cursed men like Ham Noah always let it to fallow
Forgotten it was at best, and at worst, swept into a hollow

The Abraham Terah’s covenant of sea-sand and stars
Was blighted to blitz by Maid Hagar and hers
Oh! To covenant on symbols was to give man no bars

Once, you’d sculptured stone-tablets for Moses Amram
Sorry! It crushed-mixed with idols; both roses and ram
Frustrated once more again; your covenant in a jam

Imagine that heired covenant of Joshua Nun to conquer
Desperate rogues like Achan Carmi buried along the conquer
No, not now Lord! You are certain that we should conquer

You knew your covenant will always fail
So long as they’re things that always derail

Then you gave Israel a bull-goat blood covenant
Yet Hophni, Phinehas; both Eli’s and both nonchalant
Kept chewing at the contents of each sacred covenant

Even then your best symbol; the Mercy Seat
Ended up not better than spoils of Israel’s defeat
So now swore you by your life, blood and meat

You made me a Last Covenant sworn by Yourself
Without consideration or value, you part-in myself
Yet the both ways of this deal still based on thyself

Only you in your majesty can resile it invalid
Not death, not life; not creatures, angels nor fleet;
Not time, nor breadth can bring this covenant to bleed

Now I'm the apple, cherry, orange and all of God’s eye
To touch my dear covenant life is to make El-God go blind!
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