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TITLE: God Be With You, Pastor Doug
By Lynn Jacky
03/16/08
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Pastor Doug served our congregations for 5 years and inspired us in so many ways and still does. I Composed this in May/87 - Sung by the children and Youth Choir at the farwell Picinc in June/87.
God Be With You, Pastor Doug


You gave us your songs, the hope it can be done.
Yes, we’re all a little richer cause you came.
Tobogganing, hot dogs, Halloween and popcorn too.
We all pray, God bless you, Pastor Doug.

Pastor Doug, Pastor Doug,
God is leading you away, we all miss you, we have your memories.
All the seeds have grown to flowers, oh...they’ll bloom up every year.
We all say, we love you, Pastor Doug.

You were like a child with us, and you were a friend to each.
Your brown bag, full of stories of God’s love.
You said, “caring leads to sharing, boldly witness Jesus’ love.”
We all say, thank you, Pastor Doug.

Pastor Doug, Pastor Doug, each one has his memories.
Joy and laughter, parting sadness that we share.
For no matter where God sends you, your first Parish is your ‘love’.
We all pray, God bless you, Pastor Doug.

You drove the bus for us, Wonderland was such great fun.
Choir parties, bus trips, camping and sing songs.
We will not forget you - you are in our hearts to stay.
God go with you, till we meet again.

Pastor Doug, Pastor Doug, God is leading you away
We all miss you, we have your memories.
We will not forget you -you are in our hearts to stay.
God go with you, till we meet again.
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