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TITLE: Chickens in the Barn Yard
By Martha Davis
03/11/08
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This is my first attempt at children's writing, and I would love to submit this to a publisher as a picture book. Brutal feedback is welcome and appreciated.
Chickens in the barn yard
Pecking at the ground
Search for bits of food to eat,
Thereís little to be found.

Chickens of all colors,
Speckled, white, and black,
Search for bits of food to eat
In every nook and crack.

Chickens big and chickens small,
Strutting all around
Search for bits of food to eató
Now, do you hear that sound?

Chickens running to and fro
Because they have a hunch
Someoneís bringing food to eat;
Oh, yes! Itís time for lunch!

Chickens clucking noisily;
They all fly from their nests.
Itís Poppie with his bag of feed
And Baby as his guest.

Baby in the barn yard
Sits on Poppieís knee
To toss the bits of food to eat
And claps and laughs with glee.

Chickens in the barn yard
Pecking at the ground,
Find the bits of food to eat
That Poppie throws around.

Now lunch time is over;
Itís time for hens to nest.
And Poppie and his Baby
Go home to take a rest.
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