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TITLE: Mists of Time
By
03/10/08
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I wrote this just after the death of my mother two weeks ago. I was allowed an article from her home and I chose a beautiful clock with a swinging pendulum. The words just came.
For now
The clock ticks
The pendulum swings
To and fro
The seconds
Move forward

The face of God
Hidden
Into eternity
His love
Swirls
Holy Spirit
No one knows
His time

Everything the same
But everything
Has changed
Myriad
Memories
Swirling
Into mists of time

The old
The new
Is here
God said it would spring up
It has sprung!

Peace
Conflict
Stilled
Where are the arrows?
Shielded
Armour of faith

Look above
Heavenly realms
Outside
Of time

What lay before?
Jesus
What lays now?
Jesus
What lays ahead?
Jesus

Jesus loves you!
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