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TITLE: Let God Outta the Box
By Amber Riebe
02/22/08
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Just a thrown together fun sort of piece that hopefully also has a strong message. Probably would work best as rap.
Why you so quick to tell me what God can’t do?
So influenced by others you’re blind to the truth.
So used to following strict religious doctrine
you wouldn’t hear even if you wanted to listen!
Think you’re so smart but you better think again,
you just one of many thinking you got God pinned!

You say you have the Almighty figured out…
Great than I guess you got nothing to think about.
But I dare; no, I double dare you…
crack open the box and see what God can do!
I said I dare; no, I double dare you…
let God outta the box and see how He can move!

Don’t you know His power is without restriction?
He’s a God without boundaries or limitation.
He’s not contained within man’s scientific laws.
Listen, to you and me His still small voice calls.
Can’t you feel a stir deep in your core?
Don’t you know in your soul He wants to give more?

You say you have the Almighty figured out…
Great than I guess you got nothing to think about.
But I dare; no, I double dare you…
crack open the box and see what God can do!
I said I dare; no, I double dare you…
let God outta the box and see how He can move!

I promise if you taste you will surely see
Just how intense the Father’s love can be.
He has a fire of passion to light within your soul.
You gotta open up the box so His fire can grow.
You gotta crack open the box and give Him a chance.
Open up the box and let the Holy Spirit free to dance!

You say you have the Almighty figured out…
Great than I guess you got nothing to think about.
But I dare; no, I double dare you…
crack open the box and see what God can do!
I said I dare; no, I double dare you…
let God outta the box and see how He can move!

I dare; no, I double dare you…
crack open the box and see what God can do!
I said I dare; no, I double dare you…
let God outta the box and see how He can move!
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