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I tried to make the lines have closer to the same number of beats but when I did they just didn't flow with the melody in my mind.
Let me know how it sounds to you...it's meant to start out on the slower side and start rockin more as it goes. By the end it should be jammin pretty well (if there was music for it, that is-lol)I guess maybe if you think along the lines of Jonah 33 that would be close to the sound I was picturing for this piece.
Alone…
is how you say you feel.
But you’re not alone.
That lonely feeling…
the feeling is not real.
‘cause I’m right here.
I’m here by your side
I’ll never leave you.
I won’t leave you behind.
Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
I’m in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
I’m always there
by your side.
Forever I’ll be…
With you.
You’ll always be with Me.
So if you feel alone
in the night or day,
child, close your eyes
and whisper My name.
It’s all you need to do
I’m always here with you.
So just speak out My name…
and you’ll hear Me say;
Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
I’m in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
I’m always there
by your side.
Forever I’ll be…
With you.
You’ll always be with Me.
Do you know, don’t you know?
Nothing can part us!
Not demons below
Or the angels above
Can take you away from all of My love.
No mountain too high
There’s no ocean too deep…
To separate you from Me.
So, now tell Me…
TELL ME!
Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
I’m in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
I’m always there
by your side.
Forever I’ll be…
With you…
I’m in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
I’m always there
by your side.
Forever I’ll be…
With you…
I’ll be with you,
and always
you’ll be with Me.
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