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TITLE: Can You Feel Me?
By Amber Riebe
02/17/08
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I tried to make the lines have closer to the same number of beats but when I did they just didn't flow with the melody in my mind.

Let me know how it sounds to you...it's meant to start out on the slower side and start rockin more as it goes. By the end it should be jammin pretty well (if there was music for it, that is-lol)I guess maybe if you think along the lines of Jonah 33 that would be close to the sound I was picturing for this piece.
AloneÖ

is how you say you feel.
But youíre not alone.
That lonely feelingÖ
the feeling is not real.
Ďcause Iím right here.
Iím here by your side
Iíll never leave you.
I wonít leave you behind.

Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
Iím in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
Iím always there
by your side.
Forever Iíll beÖ
With you.
Youíll always be with Me.

So if you feel alone
in the night or day,
child, close your eyes
and whisper My name.
Itís all you need to do
Iím always here with you.
So just speak out My nameÖ
and youíll hear Me say;

Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
Iím in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
Iím always there
by your side.
Forever Iíll beÖ
With you.
Youíll always be with Me.

Do you know, donít you know?
Nothing can part us!
Not demons below
Or the angels above
Can take you away from all of My love.
No mountain too high
Thereís no ocean too deepÖ
To separate you from Me.

So, now tell MeÖ
TELL ME!

Can you feel Me?
Now do you feel Me?
Iím in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
Iím always there
by your side.
Forever Iíll beÖ
With youÖ

Iím in the sun, in the rain,
even in the air.
Wherever you go,
Iím always there
by your side.
Forever Iíll beÖ
With youÖ
Iíll be with you,
and always
youíll be with Me.
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