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TITLE: 6FS#5-Light The Flame (The Lonewolf Remix)
By David (The Goliath Assassin)
02/10/08
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Here is another song I had to re-write once or twice. What I really want for this song is to be able to stir people to action! I don't have a band or a label or anything, but one day I will. So if you saw me rockin' this onstage, what's your immediate reaction? Are you lining-up to join the Giantslayer Infantry? Or are you standing there saying "Close, but no cigar, GA?"
A lone wolf will forget how to make friends.
A recluse will be safe, but to what end?
Inside of the Steal, something’s stifling me.
I’ve forgotten how it feels to simply breathe.
This voice of passion is what gets me high!
This pursuit of better is what keeps me alive!
But God does not give gifts only to one man.
I should empower others just as best I can!

No, I cannot keep this all to myself!
That is not the way that life was meant to be.
God says to let our gifts shine through as evidence
Of our obedience to our Heavenly King!
Inside this armor, I feel despair tempting me.
Trying to keep me from what I’ve always wanted to be.
Arrogance will not become the death of me!
I need to open up to my society!

Push my fingers through this tiny crack…
Strangle the demon chipping away at my back…
Though this hardly constitutes my “breaking free…”
I’m sticking up for the man who I’ve claimed to be…

Come learn the tricks that I’ve got up my sleeve!
Come and share the blessings God has given to me!
Come and meet the man inside this rusted can
Who wants to share his mission with his fellow man!
Together, we can loose the grip of Sin!
And we can change the world that we are living in!
Where is a good place to start? Where do we begin?
We’ve got to UNIFY ourselves to ONE MISSION!

Goliath Assassin? Just what does it mean?
Is it only a throw-back to some Bible scene?
Or is there something more powerful in its meaning?
Is there room in this militia for everybody?
How could I have thought the lone-wolf way was right?
I know it’s for more than me that Christ was crucified!
I offer up “Goliath Assassin” to Thee!
Make him a BOLD new leader for a BRAND NEW TEAM!


David A. Johnstone Page 11 9/28/2006


(Our promise) Indomitable love of our Christ!
(Our product) More passion than can be pacified!
(Our purpose) Looking to light the flame of your passion?
Approach me! I knight you Goliath Assassin!

Welcome all newcomers to our company!
The first division of the Giantslayer Infantry!
An army bought through Jesus, and trained to detect
The evils in this world and confront them direct!
We have no greater teacher than Our Holy Lord!
We have no weapon stronger than our vocal chords!
These bladed tongues are gilded with His holy words.
The words he passed down to our ears as sharpened swords!

We’ve got to LIGHT these glowing coals inside our eyes!
So we can unify our goals and MULTIPLY!
An army of one man can only fight with two hands!
But a whole generation really MAKES A STAND!
Our first target is all of this mist in the air
Which leeks inside men’s minds and makes them too bored to care!
If we could speak with words that cut through to the point
Then we can knock this evil apparatus out of joint!

(Our promise) Indomitable love of our Christ!
(Our product) More passion than can be pacified!
(Our purpose) Looking to light the flame of your passion?
Approach me! I knight you Goliath Assassin!

This evil apparatus has of yet to be recognized…
But it’s effects on men are so plain to see…
We’ve got to light the source of passion hiding inside…
And stoke the flames of truths that set discerned men free…

(Our promise) Indomitable love of our Christ!
(Our product) More passion than can be pacified!
(Our purpose) Looking to light the flame of your passion?
Approach me! I knight you Goliath Assassin!
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