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TITLE: 6FS#1-The Six Foot Sword
By David (The Goliath Assassin)
02/10/08
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Hello, all first-time readers! My name's David and I am the "Goliath Assassin." I've been a metal head and a writer all my life, but only when I started writing for the Lord was my "GA" persona born. Some of my greatest influences in Christian metal are bands like P.O.D., Disciple, Killswitch Engage, and Demon Hunter. Most of my songs have sections that appear all in CAPS. That's your clue that I'm screamin' at the top of my LUNGS! My writing has a softer side too, but those gentle writes are a rare find in my collection. So as you're reading this (and any other) song I wrote, please judge me as a serious contender for the Christian metal mainstream. I don't have a CD yet, but one day I will. And I'll never "ball with the big boys" unless I am rated and tested as such. Peace and thanks! ~GA
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I been chokin’ on!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that I’ve denied!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that the unfaithful used to bleed my body dry!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I extracted!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that healed my wounds!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...this son of David raises up to You!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

My music is my sword in the war for the mind!
There’s a crusade going on in intellectual times!
The Media War is being lost this hour
By disheartened Christians who can only cower

In fear of the darkening status quo.
The kingdom of the Lord never darkens, though!
This may not be the same world it used to be
But in God, we have the same opportunity!

Spare them all my Lord! These are all good men!
They’ve only been confused and taught to pretend
That “Do unto others…” should actually read
“I don’t need your help! Don’t do nothin’ for me!”

But the Lord commands us to go out and teach
By example, and not just constantly preach
About all the love that we feel inside!
Hey Daddy, why you blush? You got somethin’ to hide?

THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I been chokin’ on!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that I’ve denied!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that the unfaithful used to bleed my body dry!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I extracted!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that healed my wounds!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...this son of David raises up to You!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

There’s some evil things amiss in this world!
I wish I could kiss every boy and girl
On the forehead with the lips of the Lord!
But those lips aren’t mine, so I’ll USE MY SWORD!

To pave the way for the meek at heart.
And for those who just don’t know where to start
Take a hint from the man with the Six Foot Sword!
And come ready and willing to serve the Lord!

I can’t guarantee this battle won’t be rough!
But it’s easier than spiritual chains and cuffs!
Like the way Satan removed the prayer from schools.
(And they thought it was their own idea, the fools!)

This country was built on the Lord above.
But it’s no longer the Lord that we’re thinking of!
And then we wonder why the money’s value disappears!
Is it “In God we trust?” Or “Sorry, God’s not here!”

THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I been chokin’ on!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that I’ve denied!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that the unfaithful used to bleed my body dry!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

THIS IS THE SWORD! (...that I extracted!)
HIS IS THE WORD! (...that healed my wounds!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (...this son of David raises up to You!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!

YEAH, THIS IS THE SWORD! (The Six Foot Sword!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (The Six Foot Sword!)
THIS IS THE SWORD! (The Six Foot Sword!)
THIS IS THE SWORD AND HIS IS THE WORD!
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