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TITLE: The Lady Bug from Heaven
By Melanie Lankford
02/07/08
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A short childrens story geared towards toddlers age group 2-4. It's a story to teach about the senses as well as God's everlasting love. The book has illistrations depecting each description of nature.
The adventures of one heavenly Ladybug who was not afraid to ask God....

"God, someday I would like to visit the world you created, to see it, to feel it, smell and taste it."

"Okay Ladybug you have a 3 hour pass into my majestic world", said God.


"Really God, Oh thank you"

So Ladybug travels to the majestic world god created and begins her 3 hour journey.

Wow, I can't believe God created all of this; it is even more majestic than I had dreamed about.

Ladybug scurries over rocks so shinny and sparkly she can hardly believe just how precious they are.

Ladybug hears the sound of rushing water cascading down; she hops on a twig and rides down the misty waterfall, landing in a pool of crystal green water.

Once back on the water banks she praises God for the magical adventure she had on the waterfall.

Ladybug continues trekking the land taking in the sounds of the waterfall and inhaling the smells of freshly bloomed Jasmine and Honeysuckle.

She makes her way to a patch of wild strawberries and eats the sweet juicy berries until her belly is so full she can hardly walk.

Ladybug slowly makes her way to the shade of a weeping willow tree, lays down to rest her full belly and listens to the sound of the willow branches as they dance in the soft summer breeze. She falls into a sweet summer nap.

When Ladybug wakes up she is back in heaven, she scurries about to find God.

"Oh God, it was such a special journey the world you created is so tranquil and gracefully flowing"

"I wish you could have been there with me God to experience the awe and wonder."

"Ladybug I was with you, I am always with you weather in heaven or on earth I am where ever you are, where your heart is my heart is too. I am with all living beings at all times."
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