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I would like a critique from the point of view of the rules of writing poetry please.
I AM One and I AM Three,
I AM the Holy Trinity
I am mortal, one yet three,
Created by the Trinity,
Body, mind and spirit me,
Fallen from infinity.
My mind is one, divide by three,
Thought, will, emotions, given me,
Ruled by subconscious memory,
A stronghold gripped by lies you see.
The senses took my mind astray,
I cannot mend it anyway.
The Great I AM, the One in Three
He came to heal inside of me,
Fill my spirit space today,
Renew me now O Lord I pray.
Teach my mind, its will this day,
Teach it how to go Your way,
Break the lies, the strongholds bare,
Re-create Your image there.
Renewed! In Him, the One in Three,
Iím living for Eternity.
Copyright December 2007
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