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TITLE: This Love Feels Bran New
By Amber Riebe
12/26/07
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These words were given to me from the Lord. My prayer is that they will touch your heart and bring you joy.
I wish you would realize
since the beginning of time
youíve been on my mind.
Not one second goes by
that Iím not thinking of you;
and every time I look into your eyes,
this love feels brand new...

I watch as the sun shines down upon your face.
Youíre so beautiful.
I love you more than anything else I made.
Every time I think of you,
it takes my breath away.
Iím completely in love with you,
for you thereís nothing I wouldnít do.
I love you so much that I died for you.
I died so we wouldnít be separated
forever by sin;
and if I had to do it all over,
I wouldnít think twice
about laying down my life again.
I wish you could see
that you mean everything to me.

Before this world even began
I had every detail about you perfectly planned.
Everything about you
was carefully recorded in My book.
I checked time and time again
to make sure nothing was overlooked.
Before there was anything
I knew the color of your eyes, your hair, your skin.
And before you were born
I placed your soul within
the tiny body being formed.
Iíve loved you from the beginning of time
and I planned the exact day,
the exact moment for you to be born.

Not one second of your life has happened by chance;
not today, not tomorrow, not your past.
Each one of your days
is a day I personally planned.
Iíve been here with you through it all.
Iíve been here every time you slipped
and every time you stood tall.
Iíve watched every smile
and Iíve caught in my hands
every tear that did fall.
Iíve been here through your joy
and through your pain.
Iíve never left your side,
in the sunshine or in the rain.
Iíve not once left you alone,
and I will never leave you on your own.

I wish you would realize
since the beginning of time
youíve been on my mind.
Not one second goes by
that Iím not thinking of you;
and every time I look into your eyes,
this love feels brand new.

I love you more than anything else I ever made.
I love you more than words can ever say;
more than the stars, more than the sun,
more than the night, more than the day.
Every time I look at you,
it takes my breath away.
Everything about you amazes Me;
I canít take My eyes off of you
and the beauty I see,
I will love you for eternity.
Every time I look at you
this love I feel is brand new.
I delight in you above all things...
When I look at you, my heart sings.

- From Your Heavenly Father
Written through the hand of
Amber Riebe
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