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TRUST JESUS TODAY
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Lifeís a crazy coaster ride.
That hill Iím about to fly down
just seems so steep and too darn high.
This ride is full of wild twists,
and such wicked ups and downs.
Iím not feeling so well
and I just wanna get off now..
I know the best thing to do is put faith in You.
I gotta believe Youíre gonna see me through.
Gotta have faith Youíll stay right here by my side.
Need to believe Youíre in control of the ride.
Gotta believe Youíll give me the strength I lack.
I gotta have faith Youíll keep this car on the tracks.
So much rushes through my head.
want out Ďfore I plunge off the edge.
One of two choices I must make;
I can jumpÖbut if I do
all my bones will likely break.
Iíll brace and hold on tight,
have faith and pray Iíll be alright.
This rideís only built for two.
Thereís only room for me and You.
Itís only síposed to be just You and me.
If I look away I seeÖ
others who influence me.
I hear them scream and freak
and forget Youíre here with me.
It only takes one glance back
to see these rails are badly cracked.
If I donít focus on Your truth,
I end up loosing sight of You.
The world takes hold of my mind
and then I forgetÖ
Youíre the One in control of this ride.
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