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TITLE: For Me
By Ma. Hannah Sanchez
12/20/07
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Something is missing in the middle. However, I don't know how to connect it the beggining part to the end. I need advice on this. I also need corrections on my grammar since it is my weakness.
I hate problems. If only I had my own way, I will completely avoid it all. I will make my life a bed of roses. I will make the life of my love ones happy. I will do this and that. I'd get rid of my burdensome enemies for good. If only, I can had it my way then I'll be happy. However, I'm not in control. I can't control the response of people. There are more situations in which I have no control over.
There are times when all I could do is cry my heart out. I did my part well. I made the right choices but life can really be unfair.

I ask God
"Are you not in control?"
"Did you not create the whole world?
"Did I not ask you to do a very small task?
"Why Can't you give me what I ask?
"Why Make my life miserable?"
"Why me?"

"All I ever I wanted is a YES! Why can't it be a yes?"








If I had my own way, I would had never chose this path.
If I were in control, I would had never sought you
If i had my own way, I would had never known true salvation.
You love me.
You sent your Son For Me.
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