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TRUST JESUS TODAY
I originally wrote this as a song but I think I like it better as a poem. Let me know your thoughts.
I feel Your Presence here,
I feel Your Spirit breeze coming near.
I reach out my hands to touch You
and I feel You take this life and make it new.
Here I feel Your mercy and grace
and I know Youíre with me in this place.
Iím here today only to seek Your face.
Lord, I love how You work in my life,
I love Your mysterious ways.
I feel a strange sensation rushing in.
I feel Your Spirit touch my soul within.
I feel Your Presence in this place.
I feel Your love, I feel Your grace.
I feel from Your wings Your Spirit breeze.
It doesnít matter that Youíre someone my eyes canít see.
I feel You in the air and I know Youíre here with me.
I feel You next to me, Youíre so close.
Your Presence is unlike anything Iíve ever known.
Please come and heal me within.
Take away all thatís wrong, take away my sin.
Come to me now as I invite Your Spirit in.
Lift me up in Your amazing grace,
Lord, let me see the light that shines from Your face!
My Lord, now that I see Your face
I donít ever want to leave this place!
Hold me close and never let me go.
Let Your Spirit breeze into me flow.
I feel Your love all around me now.
Youíre rushing into me without a sound.
I lift my hands and feel Your Spirit overwhelm me.
Your Spirit comes in so fast and You suddenly surround me.
It doesnít matter that Youíre someone my eyes canít see,
because I can feel You draw in close to me.
I feel the gentle wind from Your Spirit breeze.
I feel Your Spirit rescue me,
flow into me Holy Spirit of peace.
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