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TITLE: Poem of John 5
By Scott Hesch
11/20/07
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I wrote this poem after a Tuesday night Bible study going through John 5. Though in the latter half of chapter 5 the pharisees dont actually voice these thoughts, I saw them as implied and had fun creating a rhyming diologue. Enjoy
Jesus you speak blasphemy
And though you raise the dead
We think this ďSon of GodĒ stuff
Is all just in your head

We know about the Scriptures
And everything they say
We know all about G*d
So get out of our way

We could quote to you the good book
And we have our ďTh. DísĒ
You should be humbled to know
Youíre in the midst of Pharisees

I donít need man to confirm Me
But Johnny did just that
The words of John the Baptist
Well, simply put theyíre fact

Youíll worship Elvis Presley
Or Angelina Joe Lee
But when your God becomes a Man
You fail to worship Me

I know well the Father
Him and I are One
For such smart people you just canít grasp
That Iím indeed His Son

Look at the works that I have done
Theyíre very mighty deeds
If 5,000 stood before you
How many could you feed?

Iíve given sight to the blind
And Iíve even raised the dead
Iím God himself in the flesh
So get that through your heads

Moses he spoke of Me
Youíll read Me in his books
But for eternal life
To Me you will not look

Pharisees too will stand before Me
On the Judgment Day
But against you sinners
Ill have nothing to say

Moses will accuse you
In him youíve set your hope
Despite all of the works youíve done
Youíll still go up in smoke

ĎCause good deeds cannot save you
Thatís what you fail to grasp
To obtain eternal life
All you need to do is ask

Salvation will be found
Through my grace alone
Out of My abundant love
For all sins I will atone
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