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TITLE: Make 'em Want What We Got
By Amber Riebe
11/19/07
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Ok, well if you've read some of my other songs or poems you've probably found that I'm quite versatile when it comes to my writing (my life is the same!) I just go with the flow and write what comes to mind in whatever style it comes to me in. So, here's this fun little-what I would guess-would be a rap song! I am so NOT in a box and this piece probably proves it! Have a fun read and please don't forget to comment, kay?
This lilí light a mine is growiní HOT and I gotta let it shine!
This light a mine is somíin I canít hide
Ďcause itís BURNINí me up inside!
Gotta let it out bífor I spontaneously COMBUST!
Canít get this fire out FAST enough!
I wanna sit back n watch this world go up!
UP IN FLAMES!
Wanna ignite this world in JESUS NAME!
On itís own this light a mine may be small,
but if we UNITE in Christ,
together the flames of Godís love WILL GROW TALL!
SO COME ON!
Come on EVERYONE who walks with the Son,
letís ignite this world with His LOVE!

Letís not quit, NO, letís not stop!
Letís SHINE and make Ďem want what we got!
Gonna show the world what we got is HOT!
What we gotís SOLID as a rock!
What we got CANíT be sold or bought.
Letís give this world a tasteía what we got!
Gonna give Ďem a little love from God.
Letís make Ďem want what we all got!

Come on everybody n ROCK this world with me!
Come on now, we got the AUTHORITY!
This world NEEDS the answer
and we got the ONLY key!
We can spread the nameía Jesus
and set the WHOLE world free!
So COME ON and ROCK this world with me!
STOP sittiní back so quietly.
Jesus GAVE us this responsibility!
So come on Ďcause we got EVERYTHING they need!
Come on n get a bit NOISY everybody!
Come on, SHOUT n JUMP n ROCK this world with me!
Yeah thatís it, COME ON EVERYBODY!
LETíS FALL ON THIS WORLD LIKE GRAVITY!

Letís not quit, NO, letís not stop!
Letís SHINE and make Ďem want what we got!
Gonna show the world what we got is HOT!
What we gotís SOLID as a rock!
What we got CANíT be sold or bought.
Letís give this world a tasteía what we got!
Gonna give Ďem a little love from God.
We gonna make Ďem want what we all got!

NEVER gonna stop! NEVER gonna stop!
Never EVER, EVER gonna stop
Ďtill they ALL want the Jesus we got!
Yeah, letís SHINE!
Letís ROCK!
Letís make Ďem want what we all GOT!

NEVER gonna stop! NEVER gonna stop!
Never EVER, EVER gonna stop
Ďtill they ALL want the Jesus we got!
Yeah, letís SHINE!
Letís ROCK!
LETíS MAKE ĎEM WANT WHAT WE ALL GOT!
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