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TITLE: You Came To...
By Keli Woody
11/15/07
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I can't remember when I wrote this one, but I came across it today when I was going through my folder, and it stuck out to me. Verses are kind of slow music, then seems to speed up on the chorus.. let me know what ya'll think.
Verse 1
I too would wash Your feet,
With my tears,
For You washed away,
The pain of those years,
Thatís not to say,
I donít still go through storms Ďcause I do,
But you get me by,
And I survive the worst that I go through.
You have,
Put a light inside me,
So that,
Maybe others can see,
You said that Iím the salt of the earth,
And a light,
To those who need
A beacon in their night,

Chorus
You came to,
Bind up and heal the brokenhearted,
You came to,
Heal our land,
You came to,
Comfort the sad and depressed,
You came to,
Take our hand,
You came to,
Keep us on the straight and narrow,
You came to,
Forgive our sins,
You came to,
Die and rise up from the dead,
You came,
And youíll come again.

Verse 2
You are the love,
And light of my life,
And You keep me,
Doing whatís right,
Thatís not to say,
That I donít mess up Ďcause I do,
But you still forgive me,
When I ask You to,
I feel called,
Into Your ministry,
I just want to serve,
You with everything,
I want to worship,
And praise only You,
For You came,
To bring us the truth.
(Chorus)
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