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TITLE: Only In You
By Amber Riebe
11/14/07
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These are song lyrics I wrote a few months ago. It's pretty simple, is it too simple? The chorus may be repeated a few too many times, I thought about possibly taking one out in the middle but I'm not sure if it would throw off the rest of the song. I've also thought about droping the choruses except for the last and just making it a poem. Please let me know if you have any ideas. Thanks!
Youíre the One I run to
when my world comes crashing down.
Youíre the One who steadies me
when my mind is spinning Ďround.
Youíre the One I go to
when this life leaves me confused.
And Youíre the One I cling to
when this world leaves me crushed and bruised.

In You I find the truth.
In You Iím able to move.
In You I find my breath.
In You I'm able to rest.
In You I find my peace.
In You I have my being.
In You I find all thatís right.
Only in You I find my life.

Youíre the One I lean on
when all my strength is gone.
Youíre the One who restores
in my heart a joyful song.
Youíre the only One I have
and still continue to seek
And Youíre the One who always
has more than enough time for me.

In You I find the truth.
In You Iím able to move.
In You I find my breath.
In You I'm able to rest.
In You I find my peace.
In You I have my being.
In You I find all thatís right.
Only in You I find my life.

Youíre the One
who satisfies my every thirst.
Youíre the One
who heals every one of my hurts.
Youíre the only One
who has everything Iíll ever need.
And Youíre the One
who breathes the breath of life into me.

In You I find the truth.
In You Iím able to move.
In You I find my breath.
In You I'm able to rest.
In You I find my peace.
In You I have my being.
In You I find all thatís right.
Only in You I find my life.

Youíre the only One
I will always worship and praise.
Youíre the only One
I will follow every one of my days.
Youíre the only One
who laid down Your life for me.
And Youíre the only One
who paid the price that set me free.

In You I find the truth.
In You Iím able to move.
In You I find my breath.
In You I'm able to rest.
In You I find my peace.
In You I have my being.
In You I find all thatís right.
Only in You I find my life.
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