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TITLE: Can't Wait
By Amber Riebe
11/14/07
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Wondering if this might make a nice song. Please let me know what you think. Thanks! I'm not 100% sure about where I have the chorus placed-let me know if you have some thoughts.
This world is where I am for now
but my heart does not cling to this place.
Iím looking forward to the new home
Youíve given me through grace.

I canít wait to feel Your warm embrace.
I want to see You, Jesus, face to face.
I want to see Your nail-pierced hands and feet.
In Your Kingdom is where I forever want to be.

To be with You, my Holy Father Iíll do everything I can.
By Your side I will always stand.
I long for You to take me by the hand.
O, Lord, lead me into Your Promised Land!

I canít wait to feel Your warm embrace.
Jesus, I want to see Your smiling face.
I want to touch Your nail-pierced hands and feet.
In Your endless Kingdom is where I forever want to be.

I pray the time will come soon
when I can wrap my arms around You.
I want to look into Your loving eyes of grace.
To You I want to give my thanks;

Thank you for Your selfless love.
Thank you Lord, for all Youíve done.
Thank you for the sacrifice You made,
for me Your life You freely gave.

Itís a debt I never can repay.
I thank you, Jesus for the precious day
You came into my heart and my sins forgave.
Itís only through Your grace and mercy I am saved.

I canít wait to feel Your warm embrace.
I want to see You, Jesus, face to face.
I want to see Your nail-pierced hands and feet.
In Your Kingdom is where I forever want to be.
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