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TITLE: Gonna Do Something Right
By Amber Riebe
11/10/07
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Alrighty...this is what it is. My life right now on paper. So, I admit, It's a bit of a mess! This song (do you think this is a song, because I'm not 100% sure!) is mainly all about the chorus.
I basically just wrote out my feelings and thought maybe they could be fit into a song.
In the beginning things were so easy.
The world seemed to fade leaving only You and me.
Nothing got in the way of Your beauty.
But lately I feel theres something haunting me.

Once I did something right.
I asked You into my life.
Saw You with arms open wide,
surrendered and let You inside.
I did something right back then,
And some day Im gonna do something right again;
Just wish I knew when

Im stumbling through the shadows of life.
Im trying so hard to stay in Your light.
I just want to do whats right,
All Ive ever wanted is to be perfect in Your sight.

Once I did something right.
I asked You into my life.
Saw You with arms open wide,
surrendered and let You inside.
I did something right back then,
And some day Im gonna do something right again;
Just wish I knew when

I wish I could go back to those first days.
Back to the place where the world wasnt in the way,
Where all I had to do was whisper Your sweet name
And I knew nothing would be the same.

Once I did something right.
I asked You into my life.
Saw You with arms open wide,
surrendered and let You inside.
I did something right back then,
And some day Im gonna do something right again;
Just wish I knew when

Once I did something right.
I asked You into my life.
Saw You with arms open wide,
surrendered and let You inside.
I did something right back then,
And some day Im gonna do something right again;
Just wish I knew when
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