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TITLE: Spirit Breeze
By Amber Riebe
11/10/07
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These are song lyrics I wrote shortly after coming back to the Lord. They describe my personal feelings at that moment. Is this something others can relate to? Do you think this could be a song that people would enjoy listening to?
I feel a strange sensation rushing in.
I feel Your Spirit touch my soul within.
I feel Your Presence in this place.
I feel Your love, I feel Your grace.
I feel from Your wings Your Spirit breeze.
It doesnít matter that Youíre someone my eyes canít see.
I feel You in the air and I know Youíre here with me.
I feel You next to me, Youíre so close.
Youíre Presence is unlike anything Iíve ever known.

I feel Your Presence here,
I feel Your Spirit breeze coming near.
I reach out my hands to touch You
and I feel You take this life and make it new.
Here I feel Your mercy and grace
and I know Youíre with me in this place.
Iím here today only to seek Your face.
Lord, I love how You work in my life,
I love Your mysterious ways.

Please come and heal me within.
Take away all thatís wrong, take away my sin.
Come to me now as I invite Your Spirit in.
Lift me up in Your amazing grace,
Lord, let me see the light that shines from Your face!
My Lord, now that I see Your face
I donít ever want to leave this place!
Hold me close and never let me go.
Let Your Spirit breeze into me flow.

I feel Your Presence here,
I feel Your Spirit breeze coming near.
I reach out my hands to touch You
and I feel You take this life and make it new.
Here I feel Your mercy and grace
and I know Youíre with me in this place.
Iím here today only to seek Your face.
Lord, I love how You work in my life,
I love Your mysterious ways.

I feel Your love all around me now.
Youíre rushing into me without a sound.
I lift my hands and feel Your Spirit overwhelm me.
Your Spirit comes in so fast and You suddenly surround me.
It doesnít matter that Youíre someone my eyes canít see,
because I can feel You draw in close to me.
I feel the gentle wind from Your Spirit breeze.
I feel Your Spirit rescue me,
flow into me Holy Spirit of peace.

I feel Your Presence here,
I feel Your Spirit breeze coming near.
I reach out my hands to touch You
and I feel You take this life and make it new.
Here I feel Your mercy and grace
and I know Youíre with me in this place.
Iím here today only to seek Your face.
Lord, I love how You work in my life,
I love Your mysterious ways.

Lord, stay forever with me.
Surround me with Your grace and honesty.
Every day refresh me
with Your gentle Spirit breeze.
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