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TITLE: Back In Your Arms Again
By Amber Riebe
11/10/07
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Do you think this would make a good song? Why? Why not?
This life makes it so hard to know whatís right.
Every day seems to be a harder fight
to stay alive within Your light.
Iím trying hard to keep You in my sight
but Iíve fallen and now all I can do is hang on tight.

Iím on the edge hanging on for life.
Iím dangling from a cliff
and Iím loosing my grip.
I see the jagged rock tips below
and I feel myself begin to slip.

I know on my own I canít win
and I feel myself begin to fall again.
I donít wanna face the fact
that Iím falling back, falling back,
yeah, Iím falling back again.

I should know better Ďcause this isnít the first time
Iíve fallen into this hole.
No, itís not the first time Iíve slipped
and hit the rocky bottom below.
But this time I thought I had You on my sideÖ.

So how can I be here again
dangling on the edge, weighed down by sin?
I donít see anyone ready to throw a rescue rope
and all those jagged rocks are waiting below.
Oh no, here I goÖI donít wanna admit it, but

I know on my own I canít win.
I feel my fingers letting go, no doubt Iím falling again.
Now I have to face the fact,
once again Iím falling back, falling back,
yeah, Iím falling back again.

I feel myself falling and I know I just canít win
in this world against the sin so I close my eyes
Ďcause it took so long to get up this high
and I canít face watching myself fall again.
I donít wanna face the fact that Iím falling back

I know on my own I canít win
and I feel myself falling again.
I have to face the fact
Iím falling back, falling back,
yeah, Iím falling back again.

So I close my eyes Ďcause Iím falling back,
falling back, yeah, Iím falling back into a surpriseÖ
I open my eyes and realize the fact,
Iíve fallen back, fallen back
yeah, Iíve fallen backÖ

back into Your arms again!
Back into You arms again!
Jesus, Iím in Your arms,
in Your arms, yeah,
Iím back in Your arms again.
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