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TITLE: BRING IT ON!
By Amber Riebe
11/06/07
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This is something I wrote during trials I experienced as I was coming back to the Lord after many years of trying to live life without Him. Satan was doing all he could to make me turn away from God and I finally had enough! I think with the right kind of music this could make a cool song. I would probably pair these lyrics up with metal or some hard core punk music. Let me know what you think.
There was a time when I couldnít deal with you.
Not so long ago when youíd creep in
and whisper in my ear,
I didnít know what to do.
Iíd feel your hot breath
on the back of my neck
and Iíd shake right out of my shoes!
When Iíd see you peering at me from the dark,
Iíd be terrified
and fear-stricken within my heart.

Yeah, there was a time when I couldnít handle you,
but thatís no longer the case,
you see;
for I found Someone
who covered me with His love
and protection
and Heís looking out for me.
If you think you can take me out now
youíre nothing but wrong!
Now I have Jesus on my side
and with Him
I stand strong,
Iím safe under the Son
so if you still wanna fight
all I can say is BRING IT ON!

Iím no longer worried that you might defeat me.
Jesus took my fear away
and gave me His peace.
He told me I no longer need to be afraid
for He has covered me with His blood
and my soul He has saved.
Through Jesus Christ
this fight has already been won
so if you still want a piece of me,
BRING IT ON!

Yeah, there was a time when I couldnít handle you,
but thatís no longer the case,
you see;
for I found Someone
who covered me with His love
and protection
and Heís looking out for me.
If you think you can take me out now
youíre nothing but wrong!
Now I have Jesus on my side
and with Him
I stand strong,
Iím safe under the Son
so if you still wanna fight
all I can say is BRING IT ON!


I gave my life to Christ
and He took me in.
He gave me shelter from you
and He saved me from my sin.
With the Son of God
I made an awesome deal,
I gave Him my life
and He assured me
that your fate has already been
securely sealed!

Yeah, there was a time when I couldnít handle you,
but thatís no longer the case,
you see;
for I found Someone
who covered me with His love
and protection
and Heís looking out for me.
If you think you can take me out now
youíre nothing but wrong!
Now I have Jesus on my side
and with Him
I stand strong,
Iím safe under the Son
so if you still wanna fight
all I can say is BRING IT ON!

The fight for my life
you cannot win,
for now I stand with Christ
and Heís stronger
than youíve ever been!
The strength to overcome you
is something I no longer lack.
You donít scare me anymore
for I know
the Son of God has my back!

Yeah, there was a time when I couldnít handle you,
but thatís no longer the case,
you see;
for I found Someone
who covered me with His love
and protection
and Heís looking out for me.
If you think you can take me out now
youíre nothing but wrong!
Now I have Jesus on my side
and with Him
I stand strong,
Iím safe under the Son
so if you still wanna fight
all I can say is BRING IT ON!

You may hit me with your fist
and you may even cause me to trip,
but read my lips,
you wonít have the upper hand for long.
Even when Iím at my weakest,
Jesus will be strong!
So just when you get me down
and you think youíve won,
You better watch out
because thatís when Jesus will step out
and His voice will thunder,
ďTo Me this child belongs!
Now this fight is Mine,
so Satan, BRING IT ON!Ē

Yeah, there was a time when I couldnít handle you,
but thatís no longer the case,
you see;
for I found Someone
who covered me with His love
and protection
and Heís looking out for me.
If you think you can take me out now
youíre nothing but wrong!
Now I have Jesus on my side
and with Him
I stand strong,
Iím safe under the Son
so if you still wanna fight
all I can say is BRING IT ON!
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