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Ok, I realize and fully admit this is an EXTREMELY simple and repetitive poem. I just wrote down the exact words that were running through my head one day-I wasn't going to post this but decided I'd like to see what kind of comments people would have on it...so here it is.
I’m still here, still waiting on You.
Waiting for Your voice to tell me what to do.
I’m waiting to see if You open a door,
waiting to see what You have in store for me.
I feel there must be something more;
but I don’t wanna move until I know for sure.
So I’m still here, still waiting on You.
Waiting for Your voice to tell me what to do.
I don’t want to jump if You want me to sit.
I don’t want to put the fire out if You want it lit.
I don’t wanna do a thing unless You tell me too,
and that’s why I’m still here, still waiting on You.
Without Your help I just don’t know what door to choose!
So, I’ll wait patiently on You.
I’ll wait until You say stay or go.
I won’t do a thing until You say yes or no.
I don’t wanna act on ideas that are merely my own,
Lord, please let Your will to me be shown.
Your will is so much more important than mine
and I know for everything You have a perfect time.
Your plans never happen too soon or late,
so I will be patient and on You I’ll wait.
I remember there was a time when You patiently waited for me,
so now I’ll sit back and relax until Your plans I clearly see.
I’ll continue to wait until I hear from You.
I need to know what You want me to do.
I know You’ll open a door-or close one.
I will be patient and walk this road,
even though my legs want to run.
I don’t wanna do a thing unless it’s in Your will,
and that’s why I’m here…still.
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