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TITLE: My Treasure Is You
By Amber Riebe
10/30/07
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This is just something I wrote specifically for Jesus.

I'd like to get some outside views on it and suggestions of whether it would be good to post in the regular section.

I'm also debating on adding a chorus to make it a song.
Iíve come here today
with nothing less than myself as Your offering.
I donít have much when it comes to material wealth;
but all I have is Yours, Lord, I offer to You myself.

Take my entire mind and fill it with You.
Take all of my heart and make it beat with Your truth.
Take my spirit and soul within Your hands;
take all of me, take everything I am.

I canít offer gold, silver, or jewels;
but I can give all of my heart to You.
Take this life; itís all I have to give.
Lord, take my life so I may forever live.

I donít want gold, silver, or jewels;
all the treasure I want, I find in You.
Take me and mold me and make me like You.
Break me and make me holy and true.

Lord, I give to You my thoughts and mind.
I will give You anything, take everything thatís mine.
Take my thoughts and replace them with Yours.
Fill me with You right down to my core.

I donít have much when it comes to what I possess;
but I willingly give myself and nothing less.
I may not have much on this earth; but all the riches in the world
donít come close to measuring what Your worth.

A price canít be put on love, wisdom, and truth.
I donít want what this world offers, my treasure is You.
I have the only treasure I will ever need.
Where my treasure is, there my heart and thoughts will also be.

I donít have much by the worldís view;
but I confess to all who will hear, my treasure is You.
I donít have much for material things; but Iíve come here today
with nothing less than myself as Your offering.

You, my God, are precious treasure to me.
Youíre the only One I will ever need.
Where my treasure is,
there my heart and thoughts will always be.
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