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TITLE: My Rules For You
By Amber Riebe
10/29/07
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Asking that you check for the usual. How's the flow? If this was your piece, is there anything you would change?
My heart follows after a very special Man.
To be called His,
thereís no need for a certain religion, system, or plan.
He truly knows me and loves me.
He sees me for who I am
and willingly, He takes me.
Not for whom I was or might be.
He takes me by the hand and He accepts me as I am.

He looks past the surface of what others see.
He goes past the surface and in so deep.
He never leaves me alone.
Wherever I go,
With Him Iím home.
He takes me in His arms
and sings to me a love song.
He tells me that with Him is where I belong.

He loves me for who I am.
He doesnít say
I first need to follow the doctrine of some earthly man.
He doesnít say,
ďIíll accept you ifÖ
You follow this religion, program or earthly plan.Ē
He only requires I believe He is the Risen Savior,
the Son of God, the Son of Man.

He never turns away and tells me that
because Iím not a certain religion thereís nothing He can do.
Instead He pulls me close and says,
ďI want to fill your soul and become one with you.
I want to wrap you in My love and truth.
Will you let Me deeper into you?
Will you hold on to Me and My truth?
Simply because of who you are, Iím so in love with you.Ē

ďYou donít need to change a thing
or meet a special requirement before Iíll be your King.
I love you right now just as you are.
As long as you believe, Iíll be in your heart.
I didnít come to save just a certain group,
you are Mine and I love you!
Donít worry what others may think or say.
Go by My Word and you wonít be lead astray.Ē

ďMy rules for you are there in black and white.
I havenít hid some secret code you need
to win My love some where out of sight.
My requirements for all are right there in My Book.
Anyone with eyes to see can open it and look.
My love is here for you and that will always be.
Read My words and they will set you free
No one will pull us apart, for in your soul you carry Me.Ē
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