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TITLE: The still, small voice.
By David (The Goliath Assassin)
10/24/07
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Hello, everyone! I must apologize, for I have told some people I would read some things, and they're likely to wonder why I have not... Just know that right now I am at war for people's souls. I am deeply-entrenched and under constant verbal fire from the anti-evangel (including those who say they're Christian, but don't act like it.) These are a few jumbled thoughts I had. I'm ot sure it's done yet... I only came to put it here so that it could be backed-up and not so easily subject to copyright enfringement. If anyone wants to help me fight this forum battle in an attitude of patience and love, then go to facebook and sign up for the Warbook application. In that application, you'll find a game. A game in which I am trying to raise a Christian Coalition. More players would be nice, but what I really need is more people in the forum there. I'm gonna' make sure God has a spot on Warbook. He can penetrate anything, with or without my help, but I do feel like this is my charge. Peace, friends!
I build my kingdom only to sustain me.
I give away, unafraid of having not.
I realize that the riches I have
Are not a testament to my glory.

I build the kingdoms of my allies up.
I build with riches that I could not earn.
BUt someone once saw something noble in me
So I simply share the gift he gave.

I build the groundwork for a social culture
For us to gather 'round and freely exchange
As brothers and sisters of the One we serve
As the courious blasphemers gather around.

They sit and pick apart my constitution.
I sit and laugh, delighted that they've studied it well
They claim to know exactly what I'm gonna' say next.
They think I'm gonna' wish them all to Hell.

Hurling their insults, both shrewd and petty
When I haven't even challenged them thus.
I build the groundwork for a social culture.
They fumble in and say, "You'd best stay with us!"

But what the blasphemers cannot imagine
Is that I never was a part of them.
I never gave up on my Lord completely.
I never stopped calling Jesus my "friend."

I never asked to have a special time
Or a special place to do my thing.
My bible tells me that it's RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW!
That is the reason my bleeding heart sings.

I never stepped a foot into their forum.
They take such pleasure in destroying mine.
A take such pleasure in noting the difference.
I take no pleasure in wasting my time.

And so I'll never make a personal stab at
Mere shadows who must flee before His light.
They try so hard to stomp my PULSE out.
They do not know the Power that they fight.

For I am nothing in this equation.
I'm just a mellon ripened for the boot.
So stomp away at me, verbal vultures.
I have no interest in stomping you.

And the still, small voice inside me keeps saying...
So this is what it's like to be a martyr...
This is what it's like to be a martyr?
THIS is what it's like to be a MARTYR, MARTYR, MARTYR, MARTYR, MARTYR!!!!

They fear the coalition...

They fear the coalition...

They fear the coalition...

They fear the coalition.
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