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TITLE: Dreams
By Amber Riebe
10/17/07
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I'm not sure what to do with this; leave it as is and call it a song, or take out the chorus and post it as a poem. Any suggestions?
There are so many dreams haunting me.
I feel theyíre tearing me apart
as they try to break free.
These dreams weren't mine at the start.
They sprouted from tiny seeds
You placed within my heart.
For so long I didnít know they were there.
You buried them so deep
with the utmost of care.

It makes me stop and wonder;
why in the world
You placed such big dreams
into the heart of one little girl?
What can I possibly do
to bring Your will to life?
And my Lord,
how will I know Iím going about it right?

Now these dreams I can't deny.
Those little dream seeds
You hid deep inside
have burst into pillars of flame
that I canít hide.
Somehow over time,
these dreams have become mine.
Sometimes I think;
these dreams might be too big for me,
and I find myself wishing I knew
exactly what's up Your sleeve!

It makes me stop and wonder;
why in the world
You placed such big dreams
into the heart of one little girl?
What can I possibly do
to bring Your will to life?
And my Lord,
how will I know Iím going about it right?

Sometimes I wonder if itís possible
You made a mistake.
I donít know how to make a dream real,
and so far
theyíve only brought dead ends and heartache.
My mind overflows with questions.
I feel I should make a confession:
Lord, I need someone to guide me
Ďcause I donít know where to go
and I admit,
Iím horrible with directions!

It makes me stop and wonder;
why in the world
You placed such big dreams
into the heart of one little girl?
What can I possibly do
to bring Your will to life?
and my Lord,
how will I know Iím going about it right?

Lord, will You take my hand?
Will You show me the right road
in this unfamiliar land?
Will You guide me
until I understand Your plans?
These dreams are plans
Youíve had for me from the start.
These plans burn out of control
within my heart.
Lord, show me
how to bring these dreams to life.
Show me how to share these flames
and to the world bring Your light.
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